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The poem "Life and it's Complications" is right on. I felt chills, and to me that means I've witnessed some truth. Keep it flowing James, you're obviously doing what you need to be doing, and truth is surfacing as the result.
- *jeh
...08/07/01
I like the changes on Synergy. Much easier to navigate. James' poetry is good. You guys really influenced the hell out of him. Lucky him.
- Steve
This poem is incredible. Sometimes poems which rhyme are not as powerful but yours does not have that problem at all! The repeating of the "and although" refrain is so subtle and well done. Most importantly, I can relate to the feelings you have conveyed - which is the sign of a true poet.
Thank you, Cary
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